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Wednesday, October 11, 2006
Texas or Bust
Texas or Bust
Off to the great state of tobacco-chewing, cowboy-hat wearing, boot stomping giants.
They seemed so splendid from my high north chair, but, after all, the sun really did set in the south.
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
The first paragraph is pretty funny because it's actually true. I don't get what the title means or how it realates to the poem though. I would recommend changing chair to throne, or something more lofty-sounding than chair. But maybe you wanted to say chair because that fits with Texas more than a throne would. And I like how the sun sets in the south.
1 comment:
The first paragraph is pretty funny because it's actually true. I don't get what the title means or how it realates to the poem though. I would recommend changing chair to throne, or something more lofty-sounding than chair. But maybe you wanted to say chair because that fits with Texas more than a throne would. And I like how the sun sets in the south.
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