no one consulted me
on the incestuous nature
of a swordfight
they feared
I would tear their arms off
with my robot backpack
you're the only
one who gets me
and still I'm not your lapdog
Saturday, October 21, 2006
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3 comments:
I really like this one. I first two stanzas are really strong, and, the last one serves to kind of bring back down the intensity of it. The title really isn't doing anything for me, though.
This one is vicious to me.
man, i feel silly that i didn't guess who this is. now that i think about it, it is pretty clear.
shame, o, shame!
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