I tried to mess around with the line breaks, but nothing really sounded right, so if anyone has any suggestions, I would greatly appreciate it.
madman for prophet
your sweater-vest is showing
off again in the beerlight.
your buildings will crumble, and I
won’t share my vermouth
when my dreams are of turtles and
Scooby Doo interrupts me.
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kev-star 8000,
here's some ideas:
your sweater-vest is showing off again in the beerlight. your buildings/will crumble & I won't share/my vermouth when my dreams/are of turtles and Scooby Doo interrupts me.
just a thought.
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